ext_7276 ([identity profile] helygen.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] preserved_ginger 2009-01-15 07:35 am (UTC)

*shivers*

You've captured the dangerous darkness in him quite exquisitely here. That last line encapsulates the fear that drives him, I think: fear of himself. Given what's to come after this point, all the way up to that ending, it puts several of his actions into perspective, imo.

Gorgeous work, as ever :)

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