I adore the narrative in this. I really, really do! ♥

It worked remarkably well, didn't it? It's more how I usually write first-person Ten than Rose but I'm quite impressed myself with how it turned out.

Gah, Dylan Thomas is so amazing, his poetry oh so eloquent! :)

It is; he has a knack with words and his poetry has something of a in-built melancholy to it which appeals to me.

any chances of a sequel?

Possibly.