This thing was written in at least three different places so it was rather piecemeal until you, karenor and I licked it into shape.
I especially liked the "perils of the night" line
That was mostly lifted from the Collect, my favourite Anglican prayer - defend us from all perils and dangers of this night - but I agree with you, the language is beautiful, isn't it?
and then most especially adored the "colorful words" paragraph.
I can imagine that that's exactly what happened, though; I can't imagine he would have been happy in the slightest at not being able to touch her. He's so tactile, poor love.
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Date: 2008-02-25 10:12 pm (UTC)This thing was written in at least three different places so it was rather piecemeal until you,![[livejournal.com profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/external/lj-userinfo.gif)
karenor and I licked it into shape.
I especially liked the "perils of the night" line
That was mostly lifted from the Collect, my favourite Anglican prayer - defend us from all perils and dangers of this night - but I agree with you, the language is beautiful, isn't it?
and then most especially adored the "colorful words" paragraph.
I can imagine that that's exactly what happened, though; I can't imagine he would have been happy in the slightest at not being able to touch her. He's so tactile, poor love.
I'm so glad you like this. *hugs*