Date: 2009-06-05 06:30 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] helygen.livejournal.com
This is brilliant. You've captured the tension and anguish and terror in his thoughts with perfect voice, and I can practically feel the relief running through him at the end. Nice work :)
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