Interesting idea about Lucy... You so have to write a fic where the Doctor's comparing Lucy and Rose now, lol.
You did really well showing the two different outlooks :) Well done on that.
And reading it back through I found one more bit that I really loved: if she doesn't want him :D His insecurity there about whether she'd rather have Nine back but he can't come back, so she'd rather stay home because she doesn't want Ten. Loved it :D
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Date: 2008-05-01 02:16 am (UTC)You did really well showing the two different outlooks :) Well done on that.
And reading it back through I found one more bit that I really loved: if she doesn't want him :D His insecurity there about whether she'd rather have Nine back but he can't come back, so she'd rather stay home because she doesn't want Ten. Loved it :D