And reading it back through I found one more bit that I really loved: if she doesn't want him :D His insecurity there about whether she'd rather have Nine back but he can't come back, so she'd rather stay home because she doesn't want Ten. Loved it :D
The original thought I had there was whether or not she wanted him in that way, rather than as a Nine-versus-Ten thing. But both of them work just as well, I reckon.
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Date: 2008-05-03 01:47 pm (UTC)And reading it back through I found one more bit that I really loved: if she doesn't want him :D His insecurity there about whether she'd rather have Nine back but he can't come back, so she'd rather stay home because she doesn't want Ten. Loved it :D
The original thought I had there was whether or not she wanted him in that way, rather than as a Nine-versus-Ten thing. But both of them work just as well, I reckon.